More on Dreams
Posted by Amanda Laughtland at 4/20/2007 9:40 PM and is filed under uncategorized 
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If she sees any doors,
open or closed, it’s a dream
of sex. If she dreams of a fence,
it’s control. Gardens show
her personality, and buildings
are her body, especially
if a house resembles her own.
If she sees any doors,
open or closed, it’s a dream
of sex. If she dreams of a fence,
it’s control. Gardens show
her personality, and buildings
are her body, especially
if a house resembles her own.
Really, really like this one, Mandy!
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Thanks!
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I love the way the mention of sex creates an intimation of a story between the he and the she. I love the way the rhyme of "show" and "own" wraps it up for me. It's a winner.
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